Wednesday, June 22, 2011

the best promise you could ever break.



We are so cliche. We finish eachother's sentences, sometimes I think you're a mind reader.

I cannot count the times in a day we say the words "I love you" yet this countless amount never seems like it's enough. I love you infinity past beyond, because this love really does transcend this universe. Your love for me makes me grow childish-a feeling more amazing than could be described- for while everyone is busy trying to grow up and move on, you bring out the joyful youth in me. You've reminded me what being happy is and have shown me that I've been missing out on happiness for far too long. The first time you told me how you felt - that you loved me - my heart seemed to melt and overflow my ribcage. This was a feeling like no other. People say they get butterflies around "that" someone, that they feel all warm and fuzzy inside and that their heart just melts as it is overcome by such a strong and pure emotion. I doubted that possibility, laughed a bit at how cliche it seemed. I mean of course I'd fantasized about the possibility, but I never thought I could feel that way so literally. When we first started talking, you promised you'd never fall for me or see me as anything more than a friend because I was frustrated with the guys in my life who couldn't just be my friend. I thought I just needed a friend. But what I needed was you.

And darling, we are the best promise you could ever break.

We are so cliche. We fawn over eachother, constantly declaring our love and proclaiming every possible reason why our love is the perfect love. We'd get so deep into these conversations of outpouring affection but then try and pull ourselves out, for fear of being too cliche. Like today, when you said we were "losers and oh so cheesy". I told you that "honey, cheesy is what it's called by the people that don't get to experience it. And as far as I'm concerned, as long as it's real then I love it and shall not frown down with 'cheesiness nonappreciation'" . You said "that's probably the most sensical thing i've ever heard". I smiled.

Because that's what I do when I see you, or hear you or read something you write. I smile. You always give me that instasmile. You are the sunshine in my life when I'm a stormy cloud, so together we create a rainbow. And that will never make us cheesy.

I love you, my sunbow rainshine.

-b.c

20 comments:

  1. Oh so perfectly written! "Sunbow rainshine" absolutely adorable!

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  4. Finally! A happy submission :)
    I love Love.

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  5. Just Perfect . . . Loved it
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  6. "You are the sunshine in my life when I'm a stormy cloud, so together we create a rainbow. And that will never make us cheesy."

    this was really lovely :)

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  7. You know that sentence:
    And darling, we are the best promise you could ever break.
    It's the best sentence I've read since a long time ago.
    You write really good. Thank you for sharing I love your blog

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  8. LOVE THIS! Its so syrupy sweet but without the toothache. It gave me and an instasmile and visions of rainbowy love!

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  9. oh i love this! i can relate with everything you wrote :) happiest of happy love!

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  10. I love this :) you're lucky coz my happy love story didn't get posted on this site

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  11. just wait a couple of months, you'll have broken up by then

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  12. Thank You for posting this.
    If I were the guy, I would never let go of you. NEVER ever. You would be the gem of my world, and the reason for my being. I believe being loved is the reason people exist. For me, to exist is to be thought about, to be remembered, and to be loved.
    Thank YOU very much for posting this.

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  13. Thank You for posting this.
    If I were the guy, I would never let go of you. NEVER ever. You would be the gem of my world, and the reason for my being. I believe being loved is the reason people exist. For me, to exist is to be thought about, to be remembered, and to be loved.
    Thank YOU very much for posting this.

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  14. perfectly written... and definitely relatable. i applaud the writer of this piece.

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  15. Favourite quote from this post:
    "honey, cheesy is what it's called by the people that don't get to experience it. And as far as I'm concerned, as long as it's real then I love it and shall not frown down with 'cheesiness nonappreciation'".

    I utterly agree with every fibre of my being.

    Thank you for this wonderful post !

    xox

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  17. Absolutely adorable! I loved it. Hey, someone know what's the blog of the girl who posted it?

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  18. My life is this post, I swear everything I'm thinking about my boyfriend..you have written :) this is my favorite post.

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  19. to the sour anonymous poster who said :"just wait a couple months, you'll have broken up by then"

    I'm happy to report we are still together, and everything I wrote in this post has become more true and all the emotions stronger.

    I shall continue to be happy and love love!

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